Monday, February 10, 2014

The new world

The New World


In the new world is a war of pure destruction. All states are surrounded by barriers and walls of massive size to protect from enemy raids, spies, looters,  attacks, or small squads of enemy patrols. The main cause was the war between russia and America. The war was over a new weapon that creates dead soldiers to come back to life. america was impressed with the new weapon when Russia first used it, but they knew that russia couldn’t use such a risky weapon. soon, Russia sold it to China and to African countries and they worked together to defeat America and any who opposed them of their new power. America knew they would not survive so they called Japan, Germany, France, and the citizens who formed militias’ all across the world to battle the Russia And Africas’s army.
Leon, a lonely farmer living in the ruins of his farm. He still struggles to grow food in the unhealthy fields of radiation infected soil. Leon stays out of the city walls. He isn’t able to pass through, because he can not afford to pay his way in. Everyone in the city gets a small tattoo from a special ink. The only way to get in is to get your arm scanned at the wall. Normally soldiers would pass along his farm for patrols and most soldiers left him and his crops alone. Today no soldiers had passed the area. He had heard news of enemy squads planning attacks along the wall to break into the city but he never thought anyone would ever have the guts to attack the wall of texas. Texas had the biggest wall in america. Leon lived a mile and a half northwest of wall. He had never been accepted into the city. There is only one way in and that is through the air fields where they pick people up by helicopter and drove them into the city. only a certain number is allowed in. mainly rich people or slaves were brought in but poor farmers or low class families lived outside the wall. Only the heavy and strong survived. Today Leon was mending his farmhouse. it was almost winter so he was getting the farm ready for snow and putting things in or out of the barn. while he was locking up the barn an object had struck him and he blacked out. He woke up cuffed to a pole in the collapsing barn in the back fields of his crops. He opened his eyes and ached all over. He looked around and saw two soldiers taking ammo and anything helpful to take. They really needed weapons and food but Leon had none. He had blood splatters on his shirt and he had a bloody nose. He figured the soldiers had beat him. He felt his wrist and ankle throbbing guessing that they were broken as he had no control over the feeling of pain in the bones. He tried using his arms to move and the cuffs quickly jerked his arms back to the pole. He moaned in pain and the soldiers looked over curiously. They saw him awaking and fled the barn. When he looked out of the hole in the ceiling it was raining. He heard thunder and the barn rumbled with terror. Leon tried to stand up on his good foot and slide the cuff up the pole to keep steady and keep standing. he looked around leaning safely and securely against the pole. the barn was empty and the other side of the barn had already started to collapse over time. The storm kept ringing the barn with shocks of vibrations and rumbles. Leon was almost positive that the barn would collapse on him before the storm was over. he tried kicking the pole with his good foot, he tried sliding off the handcuffs, he tried to use his spit to loosen the tight grip of the cuffs but nothing worked. he let his body slowly fall back to the ground and he closed his eyes. the one thing running in his ,mind was that he was going to die. he slightly opened them and looked up at the ceiling that was once again rumbled with thunder. this time the barn shook and creaked with violence and pieces of the barn had fallen around him. he closed his eyes wondering what he could or should do. The only thing possible is to wait for the barn to fall and hopefully the pole would break away from the ceiling and he could crawl to the end of the pole and slide the cuffs off. He knew it was a long shot but he had no choice. He doubted he could survive nor get out. he looked up for a few more seconds, and took a deep breath. e had no family and was no longer nervous for death. he took another deep breath and closed his eyes. He tried to relax and breath softly. Suddenly a giant crack of lightning struck the barn and his eyelids lit up with brightness. He opened his eyes surprised and the last thing he saw was the roof coming down.


Leon woke up in the dirt. He opened his eyes and saw only pitch black all everywhere. He tried to move around but he couldn’t. he tried to slide around and he could do nothing but squirm in the mud. he tried to use his one good arm to dig lower and lower until he could move around. once he got the trench big enough he started to crawl until he had to dig more and more. He finally got out and saw light. he layed down and realized he was and had been completely covered by the ruins of the barn. The handcuffs that were once on his arm had been torn from the pole somehow. He took a deep breath and looked out toward the daylight and saw the hills of his land. he smiled and thought to himself, “It had to come down sometime.” He slowly picked himself up off the ground and limped away towards his house. he felt the broken wrist and the ankle he twisted and the three broken ribs the soldiers gave him. Leon didn't care about anything else other than the feeling of sheer luck that made him so happy to be living. He saw everything differently and thought how his wife would react if she was still here and heard about what happened. The sky was pure blue with not a cloud in sight.

 

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

The New World


In the new world is a war of pure destruction. All states are surrounded by barriers and walls of massive size to protect from enemy raids, spies, looters,  attacks, or small squads of enemy patrols. The main cause was the war between russia and America. The war was over a new weapon that creates dead soldiers to come back to life. america was impressed with the new weapon when Russia first used it, but they knew that russia couldn’t use such a risky weapon. soon, Russia sold it to China and to African countries and they worked together to defeat America and any who opposed them of their new power. America knew they would not survive so they called Japan, Germany, France, and the citizens who formed militias’ all across the world to battle the Russia And Africas’s army

Leon, a lonely farmer living in the ruins of his farm. He still struggles to grow food in the unhealthy fields of radiation infected soil. Leon stays out of the city walls. He isn’t able to pass through, because he can not afford to pay his way in. Everyone in the city gets a small tattoo from a special ink. The only way to get in is to get your arm scanned at the wall. Normally soldiers would pass along his farm for patrols and most soldiers left him and his crops alone. Today no soldiers had passed the area. He had heard news of enemy squads planning attacks along the wall to break into the city but he never thought anyone would ever have the guts to attack the wall of texas. Texas had the biggest wall in america. Leon lived a mile and a half northwest of wall. He had never been accepted into the city. There is only one way in and that is through the air fields where they pick people up by helicopter and drove them into the city. only a certain number is allowed in. mainly rich people or slaves were brought in but poor farmers or low class families lived outside the wall. Only the heavy and strong survived. Today Leon was mending his farmhouse. it was almost winter so he was getting the farm ready for snow and putting things in or out of the barn. while he was locking up the barn an object had struck him and he blacked out. He woke up cuffed to a pole in the collapsing barn in the back fields of his crops. He opened his eyes and ached all over. He looked around and saw two soldiers taking ammo and anything helpful to take. They really needed weapons and food but Leon had none. He had blood splatters on his shirt and he had a bloody nose. He figured the soldiers had beat him. He felt his wrist and ankle throbbing guessing that they were broken as he had no control over the feeling of pain in the bones. He tried using his arms to move and the cuffs quickly jerked his arms back to the pole. He moaned in pain and the soldiers looked over curiously. They saw him awaking and fled the barn. When he looked out of the hole in the ceiling it was raining. He heard thunder and the barn rumbled with terror. Leon tried to stand up on his good foot and slide the cuff up the pole to keep steady and keep standing. he looked around leaning safely and securely against the pole. the barn was empty and the other side of the barn had already started to collapse over time. The storm kept ringing the barn with shocks of vibrations and rumbles. Leon was almost positive that the barn would collapse on him before the storm was over. he tried kicking the pole with his good foot, he tried sliding off the handcuffs, he tried to use his spit to loosen the tight grip of the cuffs but nothing worked. he let his body slowly fall back to the ground and he closed his eyes. the one thing running in his ,mind was that he was going to die. he slightly opened them and looked up at the ceiling that was once again rumbled with thunder. this time the barn shook and creaked with violence and pieces of the barn had fallen around him. he closed his eyes wondering what he could or should do. The only thing possible is to wait for the barn to fall and hopefully the pole would break away from the ceiling and he could crawl to the end of the pole and slide the cuffs off. He knew it was a long shot but he had no choice. He doubted he could survive nor get out. he looked up for a few more seconds, and took a deep breath. e had no family and was no longer nervous for death. he took another deep breath and closed his eyes. He tried to relax and breath softly. Suddenly a giant crack of lightning struck the barn and his eyelids lit up with brightness. He opened his eyes surprised and the last thing he saw was the roof coming down.

Thursday, October 24, 2013

the best book ever a living nightmare

the dark life of Darren Shan
second quarter outside reading book activity
a living nightmare
written by darren shean
published in 2000
genre: fiction
My book is about a young boy and his friend who go to a freak show in an abandoned theatre. They meet a strange man that they find out isn't human. He’s a vampire and darren wants his sider. Darren has an obsession with spiders and he has always wanted another one. he leaves a note saying not to look for him and that the spider is now his. Later on Mr. Crepsley finds him and Darren pays the price of theft from a vampire.

“compelling… A plot full of twists which leave the reader hungry for more.”  -j.k rowling


the writing style is dark and mysterious. The book has many turns and surprises but also can be very predictable. Many things are left out until later making it almost impossible to process (in a good way) and makes the reader very curious.

“it must be from all the horror movies i watched as a kid” (said by darren pg 407) This quote shows the writing of style of the author is dark.


I read this book because as a kid my mom tried to get me to read it and i wasn’t willing to until i was older but when i did i fell in love with it.


Tuesday, September 10, 2013

double space champion

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the double space champion


Ender wiggin, Ender’s game
alfred brooks, The contender


Alfred Brooks, the boxing champion. no one knew where he went to. but Alfred was taken by Ender Wiggin. Alfred was going to be used as a hand to hand combat trainer for the future space fleets but alfred brooks was scared. Ender Wiggin got a fight with him on the middle of the spacecraft. Ender was distracted from the controls and the plane crashed but luckily the spacecraft had air bags and they both survived. the plane is destroyed beyond repair and they’re stuck on the island until they get help.


“this is all your fault” Ender said as he sprinted at Alred, but before he could even blink his eyes he got a punch in the forehead. The blow forced Ender up in the air and then in the sand.he got up almost as soon as he could feel the sand as he growled and ran at Alfred for a second time. this time Ender shifted his weight to the opposite side of the striking hand and tripped Alfred into the sand with him. he got on top of Alfred and rapidly punched him, aiming for his head, but Alfred blocked every punch using his arms as he wrapped them around his head and rolled over knocking Ender off him. Ender quickly got up but before he could run Alfred kicked him in the groin. Ender fell over in pain and Alfred quickly jumped up and ran to the ship. he closed the doors and locked himself in it. Ender sat watching  in pain. Suddenly Ender decided to talk to him and they came to an agreement of trust. For years nobody came at all from anywhere. They survived off coconuts and occasional cooked animals. They also became good friends over a long period for twenty years and they taught each other how to do everything they knew. They were an incredible team and had everything they needed. They were happy until the day came shark D:. One day Alfred was swimming and he was having sooo much fun until the shark bit his arms off!!!! “HELP!” screamed Alfred as Ender ran to the sound of his screaming but before he could get there, Ender was nowhere to be found but he could kind of get the hint of all the blood in the water so Ender started to cry. He was all alone but then he remembered he knew everything Alfred knew so he thought he was all set and had life easy now… until the shark came back. the shark ate Ender ten years later and their bodies were never found but everyone thought they were just missing. But they weren't. They died.